Re: Please chek and correct my essy. Thanks
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Originally Posted by Sherzod
I have some bad news for you. There are so many errors in this, I can't even begin. Some of it looks as if it has been done by an online translator and some just has spelling errors which I find very odd.
Did you check things like "hesatage" or "bay-bay" in a dictionary?
Read your piece again, very carefully, one word at a time. Check everything, then try again. I have marked above in red every error in spelling, punctuation, capitalisation or grammar.
Last edited by emsr2d2; 23-Apr-2013 at 10:22.
Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.