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[pytouke]

Hi people,

I'm new to this forum, but for my job I've been asked to write a newsletter in english. I guess there are some mistakes in it, because one of the bosses told me there are constructions that are not oxford english. My job is now to find them, and I can assure you it is not that simple, since I am not a native english speaker and I wrote the text myself.

If anyone could provide me with any help I would be very gratefull.

the newsletter is on: http://www.intec.UGent.be/news

please give me any mistakes you can find, even the smallest ones!

if you see any constructions that can be improved! feel free to do so

thank you very much!!!

greetings,
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[Tdol]

Technology of the Ghent University. - Either Ghent University (no 'the') or the University of Ghent (probably better as it is the form I see used most for formal names)
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The archives store our former newsletters.- bit of an odd sentence- most people reading this newsletter will no awhat an archive is. How about 'You can browse back issues of our newsletter in our archives.

[pytouke]

thank you,
I will certainly change those things,
but can you explain what you mean with:
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?

[Tdol]

I misread it and thought there was a preposition missing.