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Old 08-Jun-2006, 17:12
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-Formal Letter giving Information
Dear Miss Raymond,

I am writing in response to your letter requesting information about our Teaching Training College. I have included details of costs and courses, as well as a booklet describing the facilities our Institute offers.

As you can see from the booklet, we have an excellent library with the latest editions and dictionaries that you are allowed to borrow with your members’ card, which you can obtain the very first day of classes. Moreover, we have a well- equipped language laboratory with free access for students. There is also an auditorium where many interesting and free of charge lectures are held.

Our staff members are carefully selected; they are highly qualified professionals. They are also in charge of extracurricular activities such as coaching classes and the self-study room.

As we have links with other prestigious institutions we offer you the facility of signing up for extra-courses and lectures.
The fee costs range from $140 to $190 per month, according to the amount of subjects you do.



I hope that I have been able to answer all of your questions and I look forward meeting you in March when the term starts. I have enclosed application forms for you to complete. Please do not hesitate to contact me should you have any further questions.

Yours sincerely,


Lara Mckein
(Students committee member )
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that you are allowed to borrow- ,which you are allowed...
free of charge- I'd move this to the end
institutions we offer- institutions, we offer
The fee costs- the fees range
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Old 09-Jun-2006, 16:24
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Thanks for checking my piece of writing, you`ve been very helpful.
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You're welcome, HT.
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