Self-regulation

[dean]

Hi all,


Would somebody please comment my English?

The administration of the X and Y codes of conduct relies on a system of voluntary self-regulation. Unlike to Y code of conduct which operates only upon receipt of complaint, X code states that , it will proactively monitor selected promotional material of member companies on a regular and ongoing basis.


(X and Y are countries)


Regards,


Dean

ADSkepticism

[Tdol]

Unlike the Y code of conduct, which operates only upon receipt of a complaint,