Comparative

[dean]

Hi all,

Would somebody please help me with my sentences?

In X and Y, pharmaceutical advertisements are guided through drug industry voluntary code of conduct. Unlike the Y, X’s code of conduct claim to proactively monitor quality of advertisements in medical journal. However, no study comparative study has been conducted to evaluate the adequacy of these two different methods of monitoring. This research is needed to provide current information on the standard of information in pharmaceutical advertisements and to evaluate the compliance of advertisements to the industry codes of conduct in both countries.




Regards,

Dean

[Tdol]

drug industry voluntary code of conduct- the/a voluntary..
the Y- what is Y? Is the article needed? If it's a country, which it appears to be, then it's probably not necessary
in medical journal- journals
no study comparative study- no comparative study

[dean]

Thanks tdol!

Dean