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Old 22-Jul-2006, 08:38
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Hi,

Could you please check the following letter:

This has reference to my vacation salary which has been due since January 2006. Kindly pay the vacation salary urgently since I am in bad need of money.

Regards,

Sweetie
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Old 22-Jul-2006, 12:21
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I am writing about my vacation salary, which has been due since January 2006. I would be grateful if you would arrange for it to be paid at your earliest convenience as I am in need of the money.

Last edited by Tdol; 23-Jul-2006 at 06:49. Reason: typo corrected
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Old 22-Jul-2006, 12:29
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"convenince" maybe you meant "convenience"
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Old 23-Jul-2006, 06:48
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I certainly did, Michelle, and thanks for spotting it.
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I am writing about my vacation salary, which has been due since January 2006. I would be grateful if you would arrange for it to be paid at your earliest convenience as I am in need of the money.
Thanks a lot for the help.

Regards,

Sweetie.
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