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Old 25-Jul-2006, 16:16
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A friend asked me to write an info sheet for them, it's attached. Would be nice if you make some corrections if needed.
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trip-pop- trip hop
melodic voice,- melodic voice;
in any way- some?
fusion out of- fusion of
not only a computer make- not only does a computer make
their still- but they're still
The projects self-titled- The project's self-titled
contain- contains
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trip-pop is their "own" style ..

"in any way", do you mean "in some way" ?

Thank you very much for corrections.
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....with this combination the project HAS the ambition...
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....with this combination the project HAS the ambition...
Which word make you decide to use HAS? "project" or "combination"? I know that usually the "s"-extension come along with the words it/he/she but a female friend told me that some words could be "it", but is there "a kind of" recipe how to find such words?
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