is it correct to write my Boss this!

[Mall]

I had to change my vacation starting date from xxxxxxx to xxxxxxxx because of family reason. I will be back on the xxxxxxxxxxx. I hope this is ok with you.

Regards,
my name.


Your help is appreciated

[gRacey]

I had to change my vacation starting date from xxxxxxx to xxxxxxxx because of family reason. I will be back on the xxxxxxxxxxx. I hope this is ok with you.
Regards,
my name.
Your help is appreciated

i think your letter is informal. try to revise your letter.

[Fazzu]

I had to change my vacation date from xx(date)xxxx to xxx(date)xxxxx because of some family matters. I will be back on xxxx(date)xxxxxxx. I hope that would not be a problem to you.

Regards,
name





Hope that helps,Mall.

[Tdol]

I hope this is convenient for you.

[Mall]

Thanx for your help