need help!

[Giorgio]

Hi! I am writing an abstract for my University and before handing it in, i would appreciate it if you could please have a look at it!! just to be sure it is fine... My professor is a native English speaker and I wish my level of English was fine and easy to understand!!

thanks a lot in advance!!
yours,
Giorgio

[Michelle20]

Hello, Giorgio. I just took a quick look at your paper. Here is some feedback:
1. Socioeconomic and environmental conditions
2. Use a period to end the first paragraph. of water abstraction strategies.
3. I would say: Italian region of Sardinia.
4. Add a colon. Data ... They include: and capitalized Slope

I did not have time to read it all. Hope that helps.