Please read some of the questions (essays submitted for corrections and comments) in this section before posting your own. You may find that your question (at least in part) has already been answered.
Note:
Please, please space between paragraphs.
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Use the first sentence (or first paragaph) to explain what the subject of the essay is. In the body of the essay, make your case. In the last sentence (or last paragraph) sum up your argument.
Always aim for clarity.
Also:
When making changes, please make a new post. Please do not change things in the original.
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