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How can I make this sentence sound better?

18-Sep-2006, 20:02

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How can I make this sentence sound better?

Another reason I was afraid to go to Tennessee was because I had seen the movie, Deliverance, a week before.

19-Sep-2006, 06:04

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Re: How can I make this sentence sound better?

Sounds OK to me

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