business letter.

[bosun]

Hello!

If you find any mistakes, can you help me to correct them?

1. Your e-mail is forwarded to me just now and thank you very much for your help in processing our business.

2.We hope to get your continued support on assisting this our business.

3. I would appreciate it if you could leave for Seoul next week. or I would appreciate it if you could arrive in Seoul next week. ( which one sounds better or do you have any other suggestions?

4. I am a manger in Service Team and I am responsible for service team.

I always appreciate your great assistance!!!!

[Tdol]

Your e-mail is forwarded- was
thank you very much- and I would like to thank you for...
your continued support on assisting this our business hope to have your continued support for our business- the original is a bit unclear to me
Would it be possible for you to come to Seoul next week?
If you are responsible, then I would say 'I am the manager of the Service Team'