URGENT - Please correct

[Dany]

Is this letter grammatical correct?

Dear Mr. Das,

Haemaccel for veterinary use expansion beyond UK?
Ref: SD/cjc

In your letter dated 18 July 2006 you informed us that you have sent our enquiry to Intervet International in Boxmeer. As we still have no answer, we would be glad if you can give us the name as well as the telephone number of our contact person in Boxmeer together with the complete address.


Yours sincerely,
Dany

[Tdol]

use expansion beyond UK- I'd say 'use outside the UK'
would be glad if you can - would be grateful if you could

[Dany]

Thanks a lot, Tdol

[jdanek13]

you have sent our enquiry - you had sent our enquiry

[javaclinic]

i would write this way: changes in italic

Haemaccel for veterinary use expansion Cross UK?
Ref: SD/cjc

With reference to your letter dated 18 July 2006. In which you described that you have sent our enquiry to Intervet International in Boxmeer.

Realizing that we have not recieved the response from them. I will be very grateful if you share their contacts with us.Or ask them to response on our enquiry.