Please correct my letter

[sujiksnair]

Subject: Salary Increment

Dear Sir,
I have been employed here as a Designer since 3rd April,2005 During this time I have discharged my duties to the best of my abilities. I have been sincerely dedicated and have constantly worked hard. I have been committed to my job, and have sought to achieve management's objectives.

However, I have not received any salary increment, bonus. So, I now request for a reasonable increment in salary. I humbly request you to look on my request and do the needful.

Anticipating favorable replay

Thanking you,
sk

[panman36]

for starters, discharge--> execute
increment--> raise

those are most glaring

[sujiksnair]

Thanks for your help