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Old 31-Oct-2006, 06:53
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Dear Teacher,

The following letter is for our Accounts department to issue a cheque. Please correct it.

Dear Sir,

This is to request you to pay $ 5,000/- to M/s Grand Transport Co. which is due for over 90 days. The accounts people are calling regularly/daily for the payment.

Please arrange to issue a cheque in the name of M/s Grand Transport Co. urgently/at the earliest/as soon as possible.

Regards,

Margaret
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Old 31-Oct-2006, 11:19
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which is due for over 90 days- ,which has been due...
I'd use 'urgently'
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which is due for over 90 days- ,which has been due...
I'd use 'urgently'
Thanks a lot for your help.

Sweetie
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You're welcome, Sweetie.
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