Can you correct my composition, please?(:

[Katik]

Yes you are right your teacher would be a little suspicious, I think.

Even only a little suspicious but nothing more(: In comparison with my classmates I know English quite well(: So I think there are wouldn't be any problems.

[curmudgeon]

Maybe a little suspicious but nothing more (in comparison with my classmates I know English quite well.) So I don't think there will be any problem.

Well, don't blame me if your teacher finds out. You might get marks for initiative

[Katik]

Well, don't blame me if your teacher finds out. You might get marks for initiative

Don't you think that I'm self-confident? Maybe. But don't blame me for that. I know that I make lots of mistakes, but I'm trying to cope with this problem. I do my best.

[curmudgeon]

I'm sure your very self-confident, just don't be over-confident

[Katik]

I'm sure your very self-confident, just don't be over-confident

I think you are not right. How you can judge me if you don't know me? Only according to messages you can't know me(: And if I say that I'm totally diffident person, you will believe me or no?

[curmudgeon]

One thing I know. You don't seem to be able to take advice very well. I don't need to know you to know that. You need to learn to accept constructive criticism (not that I have actually given you any) So don't get on your high horse with me.

[RonBee]

Say:

points of view

Also, we make mistakes. We don't do them.

(Actually, graffiti has been around for quite a while.)

~R

[Katik]

Say:
(Actually, graffiti has been around for quite a while.)

~R

Yes, I know that graffiti isn't a modern direction. But I didn't write a dissertation I only try to write something and express my opinion, by the way, I read this information in my course book, which was issued not long ago (:

[curmudgeon]

The writings on the wall

[yael40]

This composition is about a friend email reply, she wants information about my friend

Hi Claire,
Thanks for your email. Of course, I´m going to describe my friend Sarah.
She is my best friend, she is 33 years old, she studied law with me. She is married and she has a daughter, the same year that mine. They are friends at school.
She is charming person and hard-working. She works in an office as a Secretary. She likes cooking and she is very organized. She hasn´t a lot of free time but if she had free time she´d play tennis. It´s her favourite hobby.
The another day, she told me that they want to travel, and I recommended tour town. Also, I told her that I have a friend with a farm house, and I gave her your email.
For me, the only bad thing, is that she is smoker, she smokes very much, in my opinion, too much.
I thind, that you will be well with her, during her stay in your house,

best regards,