iso9001

[ben9108]

Some improvement areas (NC) need to be rectified after Iso9001 audit. I hope to report the status of rectification to satisfaction.

I would be grateful if someone could help me to correct the following sentence in politeness.
Dear Manager

In response to the improvement area of ISO 9001:2000 audit for LVG, I would like to report the following items have been rectified to satisfaction.


or
Referring to the improvement area of ISO 9001:2000 audit for LVG, I would like to report the following items have been rectified.

[BobK]

Some improvement areas (NC) need to be rectified after Iso9001 audit. I hope to report the status of rectification to satisfaction.
I would be grateful if someone could help me to correct the following sentence in politeness.
Dear Manager
In response to the improvement area of ISO 9001:2000 audit for LVG, I would like to report the following items have been rectified to satisfaction.
or
Referring to the improvement area of ISO 9001:2000 audit for LVG, I would like to report the following items have been rectified.

I prefer your first to your second, but I'd just say 'I would like to report the following items rectified' or even 'the following improvements'.

b

[Ouisch]

Usually in ISO-9001 terminology, any items that need correcting or improving are referred to as "non-conformities."

So you might want to say, "We are pleased to report that corrective action has been taken on the following non-conformities:"

[BobK]

Usually in ISO-9001 terminology, any items that need correcting or improving are referred to as "non-conformities."
So you might want to say, "We are pleased to report that corrective action has been taken on the following non-conformities:"

Sounds good to me. The last time I had any dealings with ISO9001 was in the late '90s - and if 'non-conformities' is the magic word, I say use it!

b

[Ouisch]

Sounds good to me. The last time I had any dealings with ISO9001 was in the late '90s - and if 'non-conformities' is the magic word, I say use it!

b

I was last involved with an ISO audit in the early 2000s (not long after you), and "non-conforming" was their big buzz word at that time. I did a quick online search and it looks like they're still preaching that to the choir.


PS Lots of good those audits do....the company I was at managed to conceal the entire afternoon shift, as it cost more money to have them evaluated, too. We still managed to get certified.