help correct my sentence

[esophea]

Here is the sentence

You can see a wonderful boy that he wants to do something.

Is this sentence correct or incorrect?

If it is correct please say YES.
If it is incorrect Please Say NO and explain.

if you can answer immediately i would say 1000 thanks
because i have it in my mind for days.

[Anglika]

No : Try saying

You can see that wonderful boy wants to do something

indicating that it is a specific boy who intends to carry out some good action

[leban]

hi all this is my first time so may i have correct sentenc in those words, had would and could when they are short cut i seeing 'd so what does meaning?

[Anglika]

Originally Posted by leban

hi all this is my first time so may i have correct sentenc in those words, had would and could when they are short cut i seeing 'd so what does meaning?

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