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shadowtigerl · #1 11-Dec-2006, 14:57

Please check the stated material

Im not so hot with punctuation...

If I could be an animal, I would be a penguin. Penguins must go through many hardships during their lifetime. Many penguins don't even make it out of the egg due to many various reasons. Thousands of penguins have to walk hundreds of miles to find a mate. Due to all of these hardships, I believe a penguin should be one of natures most respected creatures. In my life I would want nothing more than respect from people that is why I would want to be a penguin.

Just any missing or misused punctuation hints would be awesome

thanks

manywords · #2 11-Dec-2006, 16:28

Due to all of these hardships, I believe a penguin should be one of nature's most respected creatures. In my life I would want nothing more than respect from people. That is why I would want to be a penguin.

blueabell2go · #3 11-Dec-2006, 22:38

Quote:

Originally Posted by shadowtigerl

due to many various reasons.

due to many reasons OR

due to various reasons