text about why people attend college, correct it please

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Would I pass writing part now? hehe

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However, several colleges authorities have stated these associations into colleges and universities only promote isolation.

'Into' makes it unclear- it should be 'in' as the associations are located in the colleges and universities and are not moving into them.

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Ok.

I believe my compositions would be much better, after all the corrections.

I'll stop writing, analyse my errors and then start again

Thanks Tdol :)