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How to get a job after graduation


Getting a good job is the main purpose for most people’s life especially for those who just graduate or under the university. In order to get this, people have to follow many vital stages. The first and main important step to do is to hunt for the job announcement on either newspapers or the Internet. Then they have to be aware that what kinds of jobs are suitable for their skills, experiences and interest. Next they should prepare all necessary things that the companies or employers needed. Those include cover letter, curriculum vita, certificate, letter of recommendation and so on. After that they have to submit these entire documents to the employers by e-mail, fax or letter. If these documents are satisfied by the employers, they may go to the interview phase. At this phase they have to prepare all possible questions and answers that they may face during interview. If they can provide all the right answers to interviewees, they will be qualified and get a job they want.

Why IFL has attracted more students than other universities and institutions

There are many institutions and universities providing English language in Phnom Penh that’s why choosing a good institution is very important. IFL is one the most famous institutions in Phnom Penh. Many students get jobs and scholarship to foreign countries every year because, during the academic year, every student has to study very hard and perform many different activities in class. Therefore, after graduation they are knowledgeable about English. They know how to use English in a right way such as writing, speaking, listening and teaching as well.
IFL rules are a bit strict. Students can not be absence for more than five times a semester, otherwise they will be dismissed or fail the exam. Because of the high quality education and rule, thousand of students register to English classes.
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Getting a good job is the main purpose for most people’s life especially for those who just graduate or under the university.
Getting a good job is the main goal for most people, especially those who have just graduated or are about to graduate from university.
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In order to get this, people have to follow many vital stages. The first and main important step to do is to hunt for the job announcement on either newspapers or the Internet.
In order to get a job people have to follow many vital stages. The first and most important step is to hunt for job announcements in either newspapers or on the Internet.
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Then they have to be aware that what kinds of jobs are suitable for their skills, experiences and interest. Next they should prepare all necessary things that the companies or employers needed. Those include cover letter, curriculum vita, certificate, letter of recommendation and so on. After that they have to submit these entire documents to the employers by e-mail, fax or letter. If these documents are satisfied by the employers, they may go to the interview phase. At this phase they have to prepare all possible questions and answers that they may face during interview. If they can provide all the right answers to interviewees, they will be qualified and get a job they want.
Then they have to be aware of what kinds of jobs are suitable for their skills, experiences and interests. Next they should prepare all necessary things that the companies or employers need. Those things include cover letters, curriculum vitae, certificates, letters of recommendation and so on. After that they have to submit those documents to the employers by e-mail, fax or letter. If the empoyer is satisfied with the documents, they may go to the interview phase. At this phase they have to prepare all possible questions and answers that they may face during the interview. If they give all the right answers to the interviewer they may be accepted and get the job they want.

Why IFL has attracted more students than other universities and institutions

There are many institutions and universities providing English language in Phnom Penh that’s why choosing a good institution is very important.[/quote]

Why has IFL attracted more students than other universities and institutions?

There are many institutions and universities providing English language instruction in Phnom Penh, and that’s why choosing a good institution is very important.
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IFL is one the most famous institutions in Phnom Penh. Many students get jobs and scholarship to foreign countries every year because, during the academic year, every student has to study very hard and perform many different activities in class. Therefore, after graduation they are knowledgeable about English. They know how to use English in a right way such as writing, speaking, listening and teaching as well.
IFL rules are a bit strict. Students can not be absence for more than five times a semester, otherwise they will be dismissed or fail the exam. Because of the high quality education and rule, thousand of students register to English classes.
IFL is one the most famous institutions in Phnom Penh. Many students get jobs and scholarship to foreign countries every year because, during the academic year, every student has to study very hard and perform many different activities in class. Therefore, after graduation they are knowledgeable about English. They know how to use English the right way, including writing, speaking, listening and teaching as well. IFL rules are strict. Students can not be absent more than five times a semester, otherwise they will be dismissed or fail the exam. Because of the high quality of education there, thousands of students register for their English classes.
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