need help to correct my paragraph
I came to know somefacts about Abraham lincoln by David a Alder from his book "the picture book of Abrahamlicoln".first,he was born in 1809,feb 12th.He was born in kentucky in a small log cabin to Thomas Lincol and Nancy hanks and sarah is his sister.Next,he became the 16 th President of United States of America in 1860.Also he was the president during the Civil war and he abolished the slavery.Finally,i pick a book to read about abrahamlincoln,becasue he is a greatpresident and he proved a poor man can become a president.
Re: need help to correct my paragraph
You need to check your typing when you finish.
Originally Posted by swapna
1: Always put a space after punctuation marks. None before them.
2: Proper names must start with a capital letter.