Urgently edit my paragraph
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Another important discovery is the electronic devices. Currently, electronic devices such as Computer, PDA, mobile phone, electronic dictionary, tape recorder, digital camera, and many others are considered to be the significant things that bolster students’ learning as well. These products can help them store, edit, copy, delete and quickly record information or activities in class and they can be kept for a long time without becoming fragile. What is more important is that they are available for students to have access not only at a certain place but also at anywhere and anytime. For instance, many electronic dictionaries are included with the special programs, which allow students to look for structure and grammar explanations, practice exercises, play games, and read the world’s information. Therefore, the special features of these products provide students with many opportunities to improve their learning process.
Besides the Internet and electronic devices, computer software is also considered as another beneficial discovery. To bring powerful uses on the electronic equipments, many programmers have created a great deal of amazing software, which is more vital for students to learn more information. The software allows learners to interact more closely with their work. For example, once computer software such as Microsoft Encarta, Microsoft student, Britannica or Encyclopedia is installed, the rapid ways to get more information is faster. Simplify, they just type related words or phrases on the screen of their computers they immediately receive what they are looking for. Hence, for students, the electronic devices integrating with the software are necessarily needed to find out more information and effectively quicken their learning process.
Re: Urgently edit my paragraph
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