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[ghai_prince13]

6.3 How better people can learn foreign languages.
Nowadays it’s very necessary to know a foreign language. Knowledge of foreign language helps us to develop friendship and understanding among people.
1) You should learn basic vocabulary and common phrases and then you can practice making own sentence.
2) You should prefer English-English dictionary.
3) You should read some grammar reference and rather during exercise.
4) You may not be afraid of making mistake.
5) You must read more books and remember some new words.
6) Listen to audio books might also be great way to help pick up the rhythm of it.
7) You may teach your friend. Teacher other is great way to concept in your mind; increase your confidence to speak.
8) You should listen to music.
9) You can join some language club.
10) You should communicate more and more in that language.
11) You must watch movies without translation.
12) You may chat on the internet.

[Anglika]

6.3 How better [delete this]
people can learn foreign languages.

Nowadays it’s very necessary to know a foreign language. Knowledge of foreign language [another language/foreign languages/a foreign language] helps us to develop friendships and understanding among people.
1) You should learn basic vocabulary and common phrases and then you can practice making your own sentences.
2) You should prefer English-English dictionary.
3) You should read some grammar reference and rather during exercise.
4) You may must not be afraid of making mistake.[a mistake/mistakes]
5) You must read more books and remember some new words.
6) Listening to audio books might also be great way to help pick up the rhythm of it.the spoken word.
7) You may teach your friend. Teacher other [Teaching another] is great way to concept in your mind[confirm your knowledge and to] increase your confidence to speak.
8) You should listen to music.
9) You can join some language club.
10) You should communicate more and more in that language.
11) You must watch movies without translation.
12) You may chat on the internet.

This is better.