Help needed ASAP PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ

[mike009]

Hey,
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzz correct the following asap coz i have to submitted soon,

During the past three years I have been studying Information Technology at Groep-t "The English group". I have been graduated this year with very good grades. I scored very good grades in my first and second year as well , the reason why I am encouraged and optimistic about enrolling in the engineering program.
Furthermore, I have been working full- and part- time in Marketing, Hardware support and the last 3 years and currently I’m working part- time for “****” As “****”.


Thx in advance
Mike

[niluferauladin]

hi Mike,
here's your corrected version:-

During the past three years, I have been studying Information Technology at Groep-t "The English group". I graduated this year with very good grades and also I have very good grades in my first and second year. That's the reason why I am being encouraged and optimistic about enrolling in the engineering program.
Furthermore, I have been working both full-time and part-time in Marketing, Hardware support for the last 3 years and currently I’m working part- time for “****” As “****”.

[mike009]

thank you a lot niluferauladin
Mike

[RonBee]

"I graduated this year with very good grades" does not mean that you got good grades only in your last year but the whole time.

~R

[RonBee]

Hey,
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzz correct the following asap coz i have to submitted soon,

Say:

Please correct the following, because I have to submit it soon.

~R