Plzzz help completing my motivation letter

[RonBee]

Try:

I worked for that company until the summer of 2003. Then I decided to travel to Sweden.

[RonBee]

Originally Posted by mike009

After 4 years in the year 2000, when i was in my third year (I had to do the third year twice) I left for personal reasons.

After four years, in the year 2000, when I was in my third year (I had to do the third year twice) I left for personal reasons.

Originally Posted by mike009

One of the reasons that I left my job and traveled to Sweden is that there was a possibility to continue what I was always dreaming.

One of the reasons that I left my job and traveled to Sweden is that there was a possibility to continue doing what I had always dreamed of doing.

Originally Posted by mike009

However, I could not start immediately so I have started learning the language of the country first.

However, I could not start immediately, so I have started learning the language of the country first.

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In the meantime, I had to work.

That's good.

Originally Posted by mike009

I decided to work for a couple of years to save some money that can help me to do full time studies.

I decided to work for a couple of years in order to save enough money to be able to study full time.

Originally Posted by mike009

In the meantime, I did an information technology course, and now I am ready for a new beginning and for full time studies.

In the meantime, I took an information technology course, and now I am ready for full-time studies.

Originally Posted by mike009

In my last year in information technology, me and 2 other colleagues were very interested in electronics and (MMI) man–machine interaction.

In my last year in information technology, two colleagues and I were very interested in electronics and (MMI) man–machine interaction.

Originally Posted by mike009

Our final project was about creating an application that will monitor and control power supplies located in 650 places in Sweden remotely.

Our final project was about creating an application that would monitor and remotely control power supplies located in 650 places in Sweden.

Originally Posted by mike009

In order to finish this project, we had to study some electronics and machines subjects with a help from Eng. "Snyler Cheroke" and from Eng. Marc Astrid.

In order to finish the project had to study some electronics and machines subjects with help from Eng. "Snyler Cheroke" and from Eng. Marc Astrid.

The word "help" is not a count noun. Say with help from.

Originally Posted by mike009

They gave us some tasks to fully understand how the machines "power supplies" are working so we can reach our goal and create the application.

They gave us some tasks to perform to help us fully understand how th machines" power supplies work so we could reach our goal and create the application.

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Fortunately, we had a great success.

Fortunately, we had great success.

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The application works great.

The application works well.

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Now the application is in the testing phase, and hopefully Astrid company will run it somewhere at the end of this year.

Now the application is in the testing phase, and hopefully Astrid will run it somewhere at the end of the year.

Originally Posted by mike009

Finally I would like to mention that, for me, mathematics, physics, Chemical and programming are not just some subjects that I have to study.
I really enjoy learning these subjects; they represent a challenge for me.
Challenge is fun, and I am sure that I will be good in these subjects.

Finally I would like to mention that, for me, mathematics, physics, chemistry and computer programming are not just some subjects that I have to study. I really enjoy learning those things. They present an enjoyable challenge. I am sure that I will excel in my studies.

[mike009]

Hi RonBee

Thank you very much for the time you spent to correct my English disaster
not just correcting but explaining as well. Tomorrow i will submit the motivation latter.
thanks Again
Mike

[RonBee]

You're welcome. I wish you well.