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Old 12-Jul-2007, 19:07
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I wonder which of the sentences is more natural (correct) from English natives’ point of view and why. English is not my native language. Any help will be appreciated.


1.The company has emphasized extending items selection and improving manufacturing facilities.




2.The company is going to expand the assortment and develop its production facilities
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Old 12-Jul-2007, 21:49
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1.The company has emphasized extending items selection and improving manufacturing facilities.
2.The company is going to expand the assortment and develop its production facilities

I would phrase this:

The company is proposing to expand its product base and improve its manufacturing and production facilities.
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