My speaking interview correct me (:

In my exams yesterday they ask me to choose 3 questions that a teacher will ask me verbally I chose these questions :

1- What is your dream in the future?
2- Which is mot beauriful language?
3- Do you have an English friends?

So correct my mistakes here :

1- What is your dream in the future?

Well , you are woman and i'm like you , so you know All and sundry have some of personal dreams .
when I was children I always dream to be a big artist . I adore all thing about the art especially belly dance art , and its music . I feel I need to show my skills to all people from all over the world on the territory. but the problem here in my country I can't realize my dream because I'm living in a arbitrary and unfair society .My society has a stupid customs and traditions . Always they say you are a woman shame on you if you just thinking about that .But you know? I can face all difficulty to realize my best dream .

2- Which is mot beauriful language?

I love a lot of languages in fact and I wish to speake so many languages after 5 years .
I love arabic languag it's realy graceful language . but because I love the art espscially music so of course I adore italian language . It makes me shake I realy wish to learn it and speak it fluently .

3- Do you have an English friends?

Oh that is a nice question . well , I have a lot of English friends . Always they help me to improve my language . I have them from Australia , Briten and Aurope .

[blouen]

What is your dream in the future?

Well, I'm a woman just like you, so you know all and sundry has their own dreams.
When i was a child I always dream of being a star. I adore everything about art especially belly dancing and it's music. I feel that I need to show my skills to all the people of the world. {I wouldn't say the latter part if I be in your shoes. In an interview, we need to be honest and nice but not harsh}

{But in case you can't help saying it, how about this for an ender}
* but I believe everyone of us can make our dreams come true, eventhough so many people don't believe that we can, we still can if we only work hard for it.


***And I would add to that -- I am now doing some steps to fulfill that dream. I am practicing so hard and I know that someday I will be a famous belly dancer.




Which is the most beautiful language?

I love a lot of languages. In fact, I wish to speak so many languages after 5 years(wow!)
I love Arabic for it's a really graceful language. And because I love the art, especially music, so I adore Italian language so much. {It is just very musical to my ears} It makes me shiver once I hear somebody speak it and I really wich to learn and speak it fluently someday.




Do you have an English friends?
Oh, that's a nice question! Well, I have a lot of English friends. They always help me to improve my language. I have friends from Australia, Britain, and all over Europe.
{I often talk to them through the net or_____}

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You know I'm not a teacher but I this is just how I'm going to say it if I am at your shoes....All the best!!!

P.S. In the brackets are little comments and what I'm going to add if I'd say these answers,,,,

My God , blouen
amazing .. Great wow
but I have one question :
you are wrote

it's music

I think the right is its music (:
like : their school .
her self .
his book .

but it's = it is

thanks a lot it's realy great

[blouen]

Originally Posted by Fleur de mort

My God , blouen
amazing .. Great wow
but I have one question :
you are wrote

I think the right is its music (:
like : their school .
her self .
his book .

but it's = it is

thanks a lot it's realy great

You're right! I did it again, I usually get wrong with that when I type it fast.
may you do well with your interview...

Originally Posted by blouen

You're right! I did it again, I usually get wrong with that when I type it fast.
may you do well with your interview...

My exam after 2 hours . If you wrong I will beat you blouen.

I get it I get it
wow
level 7 from 12 levels
I thought i'm in 2 or 3 level
7???????????? My God
woooooow
it's wonderful
thanks a lot blouen

[Anglika]

Well done indeed!

[blouen]

Congratulations!! Yeheey!!!