I need help plss

[rq6161]

pls proofread thank you so much

I wanted to become a rad tech for 3 reasons
1st reason is that I want to help people. I Value life so much and I believe that becoming a rad tech will give me an opportunity to help and save lives.
2nd is that I want a profession that involves special equipments.I am a gadgetman and very comfortable working with computers and machines.
3rd is I want a stable job. In the future I also think of having a family and rad tech will give me that job stability that I'll be needing to support my family.

[RonBee]

Say:

I want to become a rad tech for three reasons. The first reason is that I want to help people. I value life very much, and I believe that becoming a rad tech will give me an opportunity to help people and save lives. The second reason is that I want to become part of a profession that involves using special equipment. I am a gadget-man and very comfortable working with computers and machines. The third reason is that I want a stable job. I plan to start a family, and becoming a rad tech will give me the job stability that I will need to support my family.

[rq6161]

thank you very much sir!

[RonBee]

Do you think you will get the job?