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[danielkramer]

To whom ever it may concern:

In reference to the request of documentation, it would like to inform you that on flight number 1623 of American Airlines leaving from Newark at 10:35 AM to Miami at 1:30pm, my suitcase was lost. At that time, I made the claim and AA employees told me I would receive said suitcase at 12 am, which I did not. From then on I called two times a day and every time employees had told me a different story every time I called. Finally, I received a broken suitcase on my fourth vacation day; as a result I lost the deposit on a house in Key West that I had previously made from July 11 to July 16, just like my vacations in Florida together with my spouse, due to that I had a plane ticket back to Buenos Aires dated July 20.

Thnk You
Daniel

[RonBee]

To whomever it may concern:

In reference to the request of documentation, I would like to inform you that on flight number 1623 of American Airlines leaving from Newark at 10:35 AM due to arrive in Miami at 1:30pm, my suitcase was lost. At that time, I made the claim and AA employees told me I would receive said suitcase at 12 am, which I did not. From then on I called two times a day and AA employees told me a different story every time I called. Finally, I received a broken suitcase on my fourth vacation day; as a result, I lost the deposit on a house in Key West that I had previously reserved from July 11 to July 16.

Thank You
Daniel