Please help me. It's a short speech for TOEFL.
Q> Some people like to attend live performances while others prefer watching them on television. Which do you prefer and why?
I prefer to attend live performances, especially live concerts, because they make me enjoy live music directly from my favorite singers. I usually listen to music on the radio or computer, which is clear but has no emotion. But, attending live performances gives me real music created directly by musicians. I can hear their real voice, and feel their emotions, and enjoy their performance with other fans who pay for it just like me because they like them as I do. That’s why I prefer live performances.
Help me, please~~
Last edited by siruss; 22-Aug-2007 at 04:12.
Re: Please help me. It's a short speech for TOEFL.
"allow" or "enable" are better words here than "make"
Originally Posted by siruss
No comma is ever required after "But".
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