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It's good when you do anything by good way . I think you can work quickly and carefully and the outcomes become good . It's not due to how quickly or slowly you are but due to Are you professional in this job or not . Some people think when they work slowly and carefully, they will get good thing and that's right but also they can work quickly and get good thing.

There's an ancient thought says ( quickness from satan ) that mean it is just a thought in their mind but when the truth changes , they will change their mind . Person's character also affect on his\ her work where accurate people work slowly and carefully and they can't work quickly at all because they think if they work quickly their work will be wrong and contain a lot of mistakes may there's no mistakes but that’s their real feeling toward quick work . As well as people who work quickly can’t work but quickly and if they work slowly they feel that there’s something wrong and try to work quickly again that thing root inside them and can't get rid of it . Sometimes quick and slow work due to the work itself. Some jobs rely on the quickness in work so worker try their best to be quick, on the other hand some jobs or work need slowness and carefulness to become good. Also using machine nor not affect on work because the nature of the machine make the work run quickly but if they use their hand their work will be slower than machine because even if he professional worker can't work as much as or as good as the machine . In general the quick work more beneficial than the slower because it raise the production of work thus increase the financial input whereas the slow work will limit the production and decrease the financial input. It’s known that handy work more expensive than the other where it is recorded high payment throughout the years.
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It's good when you do anything in a good way. I think you can work quickly and carefully and the outcomes will be good. The result is not due to how quickly or slowly you are but how professional you are. Some people think if they work slowly and carefully, they will get good things, which is true, but working quickly gets you good things, too.


There's an ancient saying, quickness from Satan, which means that when the truth changes, your thoughts too will change.
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Try:
Some people think that if they work too quickly they will make a lot of mistakes.
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It's not how slow or how fast you are but how efficient you are that counts.

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It's not how slow or how fast you are but how efficient you are that counts.
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Edil, after making the corrections, please post the revised essay here. Please do not make any changes to the original.

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Edil, after making the corrections, please post the revised essay here. Please do not make any changes to the original.

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first of all thanks for helping

thank soup , thanks RonBee

It's good when you do anything in a good way . I think you can work quickly and carefully and the outcomes will be good . The result is not due to how quickly or slowly you are but how professional you are . Some people think if they work slowly and carefully, they will get good things and which is true but working quickly gets good thing, too

There's an ancient saying, quickness from satan, which mean that when the truth changes , your thoughts will change too . Person's character also affect on his\ her work where accurate people work slowly and carefully and they can't work quickly at all because Some people think that if they work too quickly they will make a lot of mistakes may there's no mistakes but that’s their real feeling toward quick work . As well as people who work quickly can’t work but quickly and if they work slowly they feel that there’s something wrong and try to work quickly again that thing root inside them and can't get rid of it . Sometimes quick and slow work due to the work itself. Some jobs rely on the quickness in work so worker try their best to be quick, on the other hand some jobs or work need slowness and carefulness to become good. Also using machine affect on work because the nature of the machine make the work run quickly but if they use their hand their work will be slower than machine because even if he professional worker can't work as much as or as good as the machine . In general the quick work more beneficial than the slower because it raise the production of work thus increase the financial input whereas the slow work will limit the production and decrease the financial input. It’s known that handy work more expensive than the other where it is recorded high payment throughout the years.
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Hm.

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It's good when you do anything in a good way . I think you can work quickly and carefully and the outcomes will be good . The result is not due to how quickly or slowly you are but how professional you are . Some people think if they work slowly and carefully, they will get good things and which is true but working quickly gets good thing, too

Try:
It's good when you do anything in a good way. I think you can work quickly and carefully and the outcomes will be good. The result is not due to how fast or slow you are but how professional you are. Some people think if they work slowly and carefully, they will get good results. That is true, but working quickly can get good results too.
That's all for now.

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