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Some students prefer to study alone, while other students prefer to study with others. Discuss the advantages of each type of studying. Then indicate which you prefer and why.


Studying alone is the best way for concentrating on subjects and of course the best way to use the time so that some students prefer to choose this way. On the other hand some students study with others, they believe by this method not only they can study but also they can get the new relationships therfore they can find the new friends.

At the first, the people who intend to study alone than study with others. However they can concentrate and learn more, but it is really boring and monotonous. In addition, they believe that if they can study alone they do not waste the time because they don not talk with any body when they are studying .Consequently, they can get enough time to review if they want, instead of to speak with others.

The second group, are the people who prefer to study with other people instead of study alone. They believe that they can have a competition with others it can help them to have a get better level in their group so that it encourages them to have more attempt. Also, they can enjoy studying with their friends and having a good time.

As a result, I can say however studying alone can help me to getting more concentration and using the time , but I prefer to study with others. Actually, I am not interesting to read my lessons alone. I study with my friends it helps me to discuss on my problems with them and get the solution. I can compete with them to get the high level. I think it is the best way for me to find the new friends .