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[dado1]

Hello everyone. My english is not so good so I need help. As you can see here I have text not so big but I think it is not grammatical correct. Well. Can you help me and correct. Thanks.

Mail I accept only Yahoo! Mail and G-Mail. I don't accept other mail addresses. If you try to register with any other mail I will delete your account and you won’t receive award. If you win and your mail isn’t Yahoo! Mail or G-mail you won’t receive award. You MUST give you real mail address so you can confirm it.
Private Information
You don’t need to give me your private information except your name and surname. If you win I will contact you and we will discuss the details.

Points
I WON’T give points to anyone. Every user gets 10 points when they register themselves. I’m checking points all the time.
Winner
Winner is person who collects the most points and that person will receive money. Before I give money I will check all points. ONLY the winner gets money.
Account
You MUSTN’T have 2 or more accounts. I have right to do with your account whatever I want (deletes it, change it or suspend it.).
If you try to trick me I will delete your account immediately and ban your IP address.
Collected money I will split on 3 parts. 45% - 40% - 15%
I guarantee:
45% - will go to charitable organization - WSPA
45% - to me
10% - to you (winner)

You mustn’t put banners on this websites:

• Violent content, racial intolerance, or advocacy against any individual, group, or organization
• Pornography, adult, or mature content
• Hacking/cracking content
• Illicit drugs and drug paraphernalia
• Excessive profanity
• Gambling or casino-related content
• Content regarding programs which compensate users for clicking on ads or offers, performing searches, surfing websites, or reading emails
• Excessive, repetitive, or irrelevant keywords in the content or code of web pages
• Deceptive or manipulative content or construction to improve your site's search engine ranking, e.g., your site's PageRank
• Sales or promotion of weapons or ammunition (e.g., firearms, fighting knives, stun guns)
• Sales or promotion of beer or hard alcohol
• Sales or promotion of tobacco or tobacco-related products
• Sales or promotion of prescription drugs
• Sales or promotion of products that are replicas or imitations of designer goods
• Sales or distribution of term papers or student essays
• Any other content that is illegal, promotes illegal activity, or infringes on the legal rights of others

Banner
You CAN put banners on forum (signature), on your website and anywhere else until you don’t break this rules or rules on page where you put banner.
You MUST use default banners, you MUSTN’T use your banners or change my banners.
When I found out you broke rules I will delete your account.
Don’t forget I can see from where you get clicks. If you try to trick me in any way I will delete your account
Owners of websites can tell me if you break the rules.
Site
Everything on this site is free. You don’t need to pay for anything.
Money
Maybe you want to know how I will collect money. Well… Look around and ask yourself what you see on this site. This website will be online as long as I want. It’s my decision how much money I will collect.
User’s rules:
You won’t:

1. Break rules
2. Change banners in any way (their look and size)
3. Have 2 or more accounts
4. Cheat in any way (to get points…)

For all questions you can ask on FORUM or CONTACT ME.
Rules can be changed in anytime.

[dado1]

Please anyone. I really need help

[Anglika]

Mail I accept only Yahoo! Mail and G-Mail. I don't accept any other mail addresses. If you try to register with any other mail I will delete your account and you won’t receive an award. If you win and your mail isn’t Yahoo! Mail or G-mail you won’t receive an award. You MUST give your real mail address so you can confirm it.

Account
You MUSTN’T have 2 or more accounts. I have the right to do with your account whatever I want (delete it, change it or suspend it).

Collected money I will split in 3 parts. 45% - 40% - 15%

Banners
You mustn’t put banners on this websites containing:

You CAN put banners on forum (signature), on your website and anywhere else until you don’t break this rules or rules on page where you put banner.
You MUST use default banners, you MUSTN’T use your banners or change my banners. This passage makes no sense. I think you must rewrite it.

If I find out that you have broken the rules, I will delete your account.

Money
Maybe you want to know how I will collect money. Well… Look around and ask yourself what you see on this site. This website will be online as long as I want. It’s my decision how much money I will collect. Frankly that does not seem to tell the person how the money is to be collected.

If you have any questions, you can ask on FORUM or CONTACT ME.
Rules can be changed at any time.

[dado1]

Thanks a lot Anglika. You have help me

[Anglika]

Glad to be of help.

One comment I would make is that it is very proscriptive. Can you make it less didactic and friendlier?

[dado1]

sure, Thanks

[RonBee]

Originally Posted by dado1

Thanks a lot Anglika. You have helped me

[RonBee]

Re:

You mustn’t put banners on this websites:

I think you probably meant to say this website.

~R

[Springfairy556]

about deleting account..is there a way for me to delete my account?

[Anglika]

Originally Posted by Springfairy556

about deleting account..is there a way for me to delete my account?

Are you talking about this site or about deleting web accounts in general?