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Basically not at all bad - careful when typing and check your spellings.Have you ever been to Bahrain? No?
Well, it's time to go to enjoy your time. ..it's time you went and enjoyed it
Bahrain is a small country but a popular tourist destination. In Bahrain you can do a lot of things.You can visit many historical places such as 'THE MUSEUM OF BAHRAIN' ,'THE FACTORY OF FIBER' and 'THE FACTORY OF CLAY'. [We would usually say "the Textile Factory and the Ceramics Factory"]
For children, there are many entertainment places.[places of entertaiment] For example, 'THE WATER GARDEN', which is a new garden with a lot of exciting water games, and the 'KINGDOM OF CHILDREN ' , which also has various kind of games. Beaches are also lots and [There are lots of beaches,] provided with games.
So if you want an entertaining and quiet country, you should visit Bahrain .
You will be not disappointed.
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