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Re: Hi, please can you check if there is any mistake in these abstracts? Quote:
Originally Posted by adiaz First The distinctive features of current conflicts and international dynamics have resulted in the appearance of a new branch of International Law (IL) known as Transitional Justice (TJ). The relevance of the consolidation of this field is that it offers a better focus to deal with conflict resolution and peace building, previously, poorly treated, by other branches of IL. | Delete the last two commas. Quote:
Originally Posted by adiaz However, at this moment, this nascent legal corpus is suffering the natural tensions of law in formation and it tends to collide with norms of other branches of IL. The acquisition of its own regulatory nature will depend of subsequent developments. |
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Originally Posted by adiaz A new trend toward a broader approximation to post conflict justice has been developed in the last decades. | Say:in the last few decades Quote:
Originally Posted by adiaz The paper will present the results of an investigation in this issue, proposing that the assessment of what I have called as “structural issues” required a better approach in the Colombian case, including an analysis about the relevance of “social exclusion” as an unresolved matter of great importance for the construction of peace and real reconciliation in the Peruvian society. |
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