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Old 24-Nov-2007, 22:33
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Default Hi, please can you check if there is any mistake in these abstracts?

Please, I need to send these abstracts for a conference but I am not still sure about my English. Please can you tell me if there is any terrible mistake on them? Thanks a lot!!!
I have already receive a very good response and now I need to take my text out.

Thanks to every body.

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The distinctive features of current conflicts and international dynamics have resulted in the appearance of a new branch of International Law (IL) known as Transitional Justice (TJ). The relevance of the consolidation of this field is that it offers a better focus to deal with conflict resolution and peace building, previously, poorly treated, by other branches of IL.
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However, at this moment, this nascent legal corpus is suffering the natural tensions of law in formation and it tends to collide with norms of other branches of IL. The acquisition of its own regulatory nature will depend of subsequent developments.


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A new trend toward a broader approximation to post conflict justice has been developed in the last decades.


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in the last few decades

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The paper will present the results of an investigation in this issue, proposing that the assessment of what I have called as “structural issues” required a better approach in the Colombian case, including an analysis about the relevance of “social exclusion” as an unresolved matter of great importance for the construction of peace and real reconciliation in the Peruvian society.


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Thank you very much for your help!

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