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Secret Garden

I have been sleeping at deep night after this year coming. Its already October now, the temperature is getting colder. I felt pain of my eyes because of sitting at the computer desk for long time tonight, so I wanted to stand up to get relaxed for a while. Outside of the windows, I found it was raining with mizzle now. The atmosphere was cool I thought, so I got myself into veranda. How cold outside! I took a long breath. My both hands folded naturally. Here sight so nice beyond my words, such moment such sight made me gazing at the mizzle under the street lamps that falling down piece by piece. Its wonderful with mixture of mizzle and that foggy light made sight so beautiful like poem. I was so happy for getting and enjoying such sight as if I just found the paradise at the moment out of foggy. The mizzle got many my old memories back. Suddenly, I just remembered a CD I was used to listening before ---Secret Garden. I got it out of the CD folder turned the music on. There was kind of sorrow coming into me while the graceful cantus starting around me.


Remember its a long time before, I loved to enjoy album of Secret Garden every night. In such cantus, I feel myself walking into a peaceful world. In a right word, I should say I feel myself walking into a rich painting, feel myself like a princess in a castle. She always raise her head holding her hands, standing peacefully at the top of the castle under the starry sky, praying. She looks like waiting for and thinking something under the flash of stars. The loneness inside is the reason of the sorrow, but she is so peaceful... She knows how to feel loneness in this world. She thinks loneness that is also beautiful. There are many stars and the moon with a smile face companying with her to spend long night away. She said to herself, why I should be sad? I know, its just my prince still didn’t appear, I will be here waiting for him coming. At the end of this story, he would be dancing with me, enjoying the stars and the moon above the sky everyday. Look, my white gown is flopping happily. How wonderful everything!

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