Forum newsfeeds
Forum Newsfeeds


Sites for Teachers

Sites for Teachers


Go Back   UsingEnglish.com ESL Forum > Learning English > Editing & Writing Topics

Poll: can u correct my travel article
Poll Options
can u correct my travel article

Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Display Modes
  #1 (permalink)  
Old 23-Dec-2007, 13:25
Newbie
 
Join Date: Dec 2007
Country: SriLanka
Posts: 3
Current Location: India
First Language: English
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Preveena is on a distinguished road
Post Jalama Beach Country Park


Jalama Beach Country Park
Jalama Beach Country Park picterusque 28 acre park situated in Central California and one of the few places where you can taste beauty appreciate appreciate mother natures gift and live a life of luxury.

how to get here... follow the rainbow

or, from Santa Barbara take the 101 freeway north nearly 30 miles to
Pacific coast highway 1 or shortly PCH 1, then exit north on PCH 1 to travel approximately 15 miles to Jalama Road.Use Jalama road, and 14 miles later, you're here. But believe me if you get wet, you've gone too far. Otherwise
from Santa Maria take the 101 south to the Lompoc exit, follow the signs and the 135 to PCH 1, which bends through Lompoc. From Lompoc drive 4 miles south of Lompoc off PCH 1. Then again take Jalama road, and finally 14 miles to beautiful Jalama Beach.


Beach activity

Not surprisingly its one of the best places to surf and a good beach for intermediate to advance surfurs. Also it is one of the popular sites for windsurfing ofcourse due to wind.
As it is situated near mountains it would be the best places to spend some spear time in hiking.
With very nice scenerie and great sun sets it seems to be the best places for photgraphy.
in addition you are also provided with activities like camping, swimming, fishing the surf or rock out croppings for perch, cabezon, elp, bass, or halibut, kite flying, birdwatching, beach combing, whale & dolphin watching, basketball, volleyball, horseshoes, walking, foraging at the store or restaurant, or relaxing.

Mouthwatering tasty food

Yes its true indeed it has imerged as the home of the world famous jalama burger for years. This famous burgur starts with a 1/3 lb lean ground beef, stacked with fresh sliced vegetables on a grilled bun, and also added with
secret Jalama burger sauce, including other ingredients. Believe mw it's all healthy at beach. They also serve special kids menu, full breakfasts and unuasually serve monster breakfast burritos and breakfast sandwiches.


Scenery and Wildlife

Here is one of the places where you can find many protected California native plants like sand verbena, saltbush, and sea rocket, grow within park boundaries.

Best times to visit

Mid June to early September is the best time to come to the beach as it is also the tourist season.
Reply With Quote
Sponsored Links
  #2 (permalink)  
Old 23-Dec-2007, 22:16
RonBee's Avatar
Moderator
 
Join Date: Feb 2003
Country: USA
Posts: 13,009
Current Location: North Carolina
First Language: English
Thanks: 57
Thanked 672 Times in 605 Posts
RonBee is a splendid one to beholdRonBee is a splendid one to beholdRonBee is a splendid one to beholdRonBee is a splendid one to beholdRonBee is a splendid one to beholdRonBee is a splendid one to behold
Default Re: Jalama Beach Country Park

There are problems with spelling and with punctuation. Choose a font and stick with it.

Why a poll?

~R
Reply With Quote
  #3 (permalink)  
Old 24-Dec-2007, 11:45
Newbie
 
Join Date: Dec 2007
Country: SriLanka
Posts: 3
Current Location: India
First Language: English
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Preveena is on a distinguished road
Default Re: Jalama Beach Country Park

can u correct my mistakes and show it to me
Reply With Quote
  #4 (permalink)  
Old 24-Dec-2007, 13:56
RonBee's Avatar
Moderator
 
Join Date: Feb 2003
Country: USA
Posts: 13,009
Current Location: North Carolina
First Language: English
Thanks: 57
Thanked 672 Times in 605 Posts
RonBee is a splendid one to beholdRonBee is a splendid one to beholdRonBee is a splendid one to beholdRonBee is a splendid one to beholdRonBee is a splendid one to beholdRonBee is a splendid one to behold
Default Re: Jalama Beach Country Park

Jalama Beach Country Park is a picturesque....

I've got to go now. More later (perhaps).

~R
Reply With Quote
Reply

Bookmarks

Tags
travel article

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On

Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Industry Park vs Industrial Park MariaF Ask a Teacher 2 11-Sep-2007 13:24
Articles: Generic and Definite kooiu Ask a Teacher 10 05-Feb-2007 05:06
Composition about why do people move to another country Cache Editing & Writing Topics 9 21-Jan-2007 19:17
on the beach dido4 Ask a Teacher 1 24-Dec-2005 12:33
nation = country? Eway Ask a Teacher 1 29-Jul-2004 07:56


New To Site? Need Help?

All times are GMT. The time now is 11:54.


vBulletin, Copyright ©2000 - 2008, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Search Engine Optimization by vBSEO 3.2.0 RC5
Copyright © 2002 - 2008 UsingEnglish.com