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Haya Bint Al Hussein

Princess Haya is daughter of King Hussein & Queen Alia, She is a oldest in one from his family member she has one brother his name is Ali and he born in 1975, and one sister his name is Abir and she born in 1976 , an she don’t have others because his mother is died in 1977 in helicopter after it crash .
She grew up and in 1985 she go to Badminton school for girl then to Bryanston School and in 1995 she graduate from Oxford University.
The most import thing which change her life is when she married from the ruler of Dubai Mohammed bin Rashid Al Maktom , because after that she come to live in Dubai , and in December 2 2007 they get there first child Alia.
I think she is an amazing woman because in 1992 she was the first woman to represent Jordan in Equestrian events, also in 2005-2007 she was the first woman Ambassador to the UN World Food Program, and she was the first Arab President of the International Equestrian federation

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Princess Haya is daughter of King Hussein & Queen Alia. She is a oldest in this family, she has one brother whose name is Ali born in 1975. She also has one sister named Abir born in 1976. She has no other brothers or sisters because his mother died in a 1977 helicopter crash .
As she grew up in 1985 she went to Badminton School for Girls, then to Bryanston School. In 1995 she graduated from Oxford University.
The most import thing, one which changed her life is marriage to the ruler of Dubai, Mohammed bin Rashid Al Maktom. After that she went to live in Dubai, and on December 2nd, 2007 they had their first child, Alia.
I think she is an amazing woman because in 1992 she was the first woman to represent Jordan in Equestrian events, then in 2005-2007 she was the first woman Ambassador to the UN World Food Program. She was also the first Arab President of the International Equestrian Federation
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Haya Bint Al Hussein

Princess Haya is the/a daughter of King Hussein and Queen Alia. She is the oldest in one from his family member she [in the family. She]has one brother. His name is Ali and he was born in 1975. And one sister whose name is Abir; she was born in 1976. She has no others because her mother died in 1977 in a helicopter crash .
She grew up and in 1985 she went Badminton School for Girls, then to Bryanston School, and in 1995 she graduated from Oxford University.
The most important thing which change her life is when she married the ruler of Dubai, Mohammed bin Rashid Al Maktom , because after that she came to live in Dubai , and in December 2007 they had their first child Alia.
I think she is an amazing woman because in 1992 she was the first woman to represent Jordan in Equestrian events, also in 2005-2007 she was the first woman Ambassador to the UN World Food Program, and she was the first Arab President of the International Equestrian federation
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