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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?" Universities should give the same amount of money to their students's sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion


Sport or Library?
As an old saying goes" a healthy mind in a healthy body", I totally agree with the idea that the money which universities provide for their libraries should be the same as those given to student's sports activities.
Not all the students like learning. While some like sticking at a place to learn, others would love to be active by playing sport such as football, soccer and badminton etc.
Not all the student learn the same way. if learning through books fit you out the knowledge of Bioloogy, Math, languages and history, playing sport help you expand hands-on experience in social skill.
Each thing, library or sports brings joy to studends and also benefit them in many ways. If reading books and do math develops your mentality, sports help you lessen many risks of diseases as well as provide you the energy to learn.
There is no accounting for taste, each one likes different things. It is the schools' responsibilities that they have to provide fair enough for each activities, whether it is mentality or physicality/.
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Sport or Library?

There's an old saying that goes "a healthy mind in a healthy body," and I agree with the idea that money universities provide for their libraries should be the same as those given to students' sports activities.

Some students prefer staying at a school to learn, while others would love to be active playing sports such as football, soccer and badminton. Not all the student learn the same way. If learning through books expands knowledge of Biology, Math, languages and history, playing sport helps expand hands-on experience in social skills. Library or sports brings joy to students and also benefits them in many ways. If reading books and doing math develops students mentally, sports helps lessen many risks of diseases, as well as provide energy to learn.

Each student likes different things. It is the school's responsibility to provide fair activities, whether it is mentally or physically.

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How much do universities spend on sports, on their libraries?
How can universities get money to do both?
What are some physical and mental benefits of sports?
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I agree with susiedqq. Provide some facts to back up your opinions.

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