
Originally Posted by
lina08
In the United States of America, there are a lot of people from different parts of the world.

Originally Posted by
lina08
We can find a diversity of cultural and languages.
In this country, there is a diversity of cultures and languages.

Originally Posted by
lina08
The most basic necessity for everybody is to be able to communicate with other people.
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Originally Posted by
lina08
It is very important to be able to speak two languages. There are two advantages to being bilingual. The first advantage is that you can get a better job and the second advantage is that you can translate to other people in their language.
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Originally Posted by
lina08
The first reason is that you can get a better job. If someone wants to get a better lifestyle and be successful in the new place. They should communicate and speak the language. They have more opportunities to get a better job and to get a competitive salary. Some companies seek for a bilingual person it is depends of the customer’s demand.
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Originally Posted by
lina08
The second advantage of speaking two languages is that you can translate for people that speak your language. This could help with many things that someone might need in everyday life. For example, papers or any documents that you have to sign. You are able to translate and know what it is saying and sign with security. It also allows easier communication and better way to express yourself.


Originally Posted by
lina08
In conclusion, when people come to another country and they learn the new language, it is going to be better and easier for them to adapt to the new system and their new life. They can have more opportunities in every area like personal, work environment and family.
What kinds of opportunities?