Check my letter writting please.

[jomo27]

Can you please check my letter writting.
Thanks you very much.





Hi Will,

It's fine. I can understand that you're so busy and having a lot of works to do in these days. Thank you for still replying my last mail. I really appreciate it. All your advices and comments are really helpful.

Yeah, I think it's not easy for foreigners to work in other's country industry and entertainment. It needs a lot of time and hard work.

As you can see, I wanna take the BPA is because I've the interest in the faculty. I guess I can use my interest to produce good results. Hopefully, I can use my skills for my future.

I think I can't write any more. I'm going to do my homework soon.

I look forward to your response.
Thanks.

Regards,
Tom

[Shakespeare's brother]

jomo27:

Hi Will,

It's fine. I can understand that you're so busy with work these days. Still, thank you for replying to my last mail, I really appreciated it. All your advice and comments were very helpful.

I agree - it's not easy for foreigners to work in industry abroad; it takes a lot of time and hard work.

As you can see, I wanna take the BPA because I've interest in the faculty. I guess my interest will produce good results, and hopefully I can use my skills in the future.

I don't think I can write any more. I'm going to do my homework soon.

I look forward to your response.

Thanks.

Regards,
Tom

[jomo27]

Thanks for the correction mate!