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[Fizzi]

Hi all,
Can somebody please give some comments on the sentences?
Regards,
Fizzi

1- My master study with the new research team is progressing very well.
2- At the moment, I am writing papers for two studies which were completed in November, 2007 and January 2008.
3-In addition to that, I have started writing chapters for my thesis.
4- Fortunately, Dr John Gilbert from the UK, the world expert on the P is on his sabbatical leave in my research centre until end of the year. He has agreed to help me with my master work by providing comments and guidance. This surely will increase the quality of my master work.
and guidance. This surely will increase the quality of my master work.

[susiedqq]

1- My master study with the new research team is progressing very well.
OK

2- At the moment, I am writing papers for two studies which were completed in November, 2007 and January 2008.

How about "I am currently writing papers . . . ."

3-In addition to that, I have started writing chapters for my thesis.
OK

4- Fortunately, Dr John Gilbert - UK resident and world expert on the P - is on sabbatical leave at my research centre until end of the year. He has agreed to help me with my master work by providing comments and guidance. This will surely increase the quality of my master work.