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    Default Check my letter writing please.

    I'm going to ask questions to the academics in the University.

    Please help me checking the mistakes.

    Thanks a lot.


    Dear Will,

    It's been a while since I sent you the last letter. I would like to ask some questions again.

    First, when do I need to apply for the BPA if I'm already sure? Or the Monash foundation course will help me do that?

    Second, If I was sure to go by next year, my age would be 17 and going to 18 on that year. Do I need to stay at the Monash dorm? or any other accomodation? Or?

    I think this would be enough for now.

    I look forward to your response.
    Thanks.

    Regards,
    Tom

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    Default Re: Check my letter writing please.

    Quote Originally Posted by jomo27 View Post
    I'm going to ask questions to the academics in the University.

    Please help me checking the mistakes.

    Thanks a lot.


    Dear Will,

    It's been a while since I sent you the last letter. I would like to ask some questions again.

    First, when do I need to apply for the BPA if I'm already sure? Or will the Monash foundation course help me do that?

    Second, if I was sure to go by next year, my age would be 17, becoming 18 in that year. Do I need to stay at the Monash dorm? Or any other accommodation? Or am I free to live where I like?

    I think this would be enough for now.

    I look forward to your response.
    Thanks.

    Regards,
    Tom
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