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25-Aug-2004, 06:33

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A small paragraph needs editing

his style is unique, and his art pieces are natural, rich in charm, with disturbance in peace, splendour in leisure.

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25-Aug-2004, 06:52

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with disturbance in peace,

This phrase doesn't work for me. If the pieces are not relaxing to the eye, you could say they are 'provocative'. Who is the artist?

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25-Aug-2004, 11:16

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Hehe, drop it then.

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