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His works, which have basically formed a unique style by learning from the Mother Nature as his master, are of both leisure and grandness that combined tranquility with mobility; and are graceful in taste.
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His works, whose unique style is learnt from Mother Nature, combine grandness and leisure, tranquility with mobility, and are graceful.

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Cool! LOL!
And thank you.
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