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    ripley is offline Senior Member
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    Default my diary goes on..


    Hi! Could you help me. I'd like to improve my grammar and style. Tanks.



    My English teacher is really a booby:she gave us a test on conditionals and she told us that all the sentences required the third conditional and so that practically all the sentences had the same structure.I hope that I’ll get a good mark!!!
    During our school assembly some of my friends and I decided to escape from school in order to go in the hills and chop down a dying tree.You should have seen the ivy that twisted it. It was enormous and it took us an hour to cut it.
    A question arises spontaneously . Was it really necessary?

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    Svaneska is offline Member
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    Default Re: my diary goes on..

    Hello Ripley

    My English teacher is a real booby: she gave us a test on grammar, using the Conditional, and she told us that all the sentences required the third conditional, so practically, all the sentences had the same structure – it was easy! I hope that I’ll get a good mark!!!
    During our school assembly some of my friends and I decided to escape from school in order to go to the woods/hills and chop down a dying tree. You should have seen the ivy that was twisted round it. The tree was huge/enormous and it took us an hour to cut it.
    A question arises spontaneously: was it really necessary?

    . . .hope this helps!
    good luck

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