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Old 01-Sep-2004, 20:57
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Hello everyone

I have to write a short paragraph about me. Can you please correct my mistakes, and give some advices to make this text in not so an easy English? (I don't know whether the grammar is right or not :( ) Please improve.
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Hello, my name is Daniela and I知 from Germany. I life with my parents near Hanau in a small village who痴 called Gro゚krotzenburg. At time I work in a pharmaceutical company as Regulatory Affairs Assistant. This job is very interesting. Within two weeks I知 going to start an English course by the Euroschool in Aschaffenburg. This is because I知 going to start a further education to foreign language correspondent, and I want to improve my English bevor.
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Thanks in advance :D
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Hello, my name is Daniela and I知 from Germany. I live with my parents near Hanau in a small village called Gro゚krotzenburg. I work in a pharmaceutical company as a Regulatory Affairs Assistant. This job is very interesting. Within two weeks I知 going to start an English course at the Euroschool in Aschaffenburg. This is because I知 going to start study to become a foreign language correspondent, and I want to improve my English beforehand.
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Hi
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Old 04-Sep-2004, 21:56
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Thanks for your help. I'm surprised, that there were not more mistakes

Kind regards,
Dany
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You're welcome, Dani.
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