Party Invitation

[rmsh16]

Hi, (pl. alter the grammatical changes and suggest other way of communicating a message)


Below message received by our sister concern. The same need to be circulated with in our organisation to the attention of HOD. Here is my note (in blue colour).


Dear All,

Received an invitation from SNT regarding a party at EVOMA on 5.4.08 at 7.30 pm. Please confirm your participation by 5 pm today, which enable me to inform the no. of employees from our organisation to the party.

Thanks

Greetings,

We are glad to inform, that SNT management has announced to host an employee get-together party. In this regard, we welcome your good self and PNT HOD employees for the held meet for 5th April, 2008, Saturday @ 7.30 pm at the venue stated below.

EVOMA
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Bangalore


Welcome All !!!!!!!!!!!

[David L.]

Dear All,

Received an invitation from SNT regarding a party at EVOMA on 5.4.08 at 7.30 pm. Please confirm your participation by 5 pm today, which enables me to provide numbers/the number from our organization attending.

Thanks

Greetings,

We are pleased to inform, that SNT management has announced hosting an employee get-together party. In this regard, we welcome your good self and PNT HOD employees to this gathering on 5th April, 2008, Saturday @ 7.30 pm at the venue stated below.