Hello,This is my first story can anyone correct it please
Towards the end of September at ten O'clock in the morning I met a man by accident and maybe it was the destiny that gathered us again. When our eyes have met, I lost myself.
"Who is that man?" I thought.
Quick scenes of wonderful time crossed my mind and sailed me to the time when I smiled, laughed and shared the happiest moments.
He walked close to me I heard his sweet voice through my ears
"Did we meet before?"
What a lovely voice he had! His facial expressions were wonderful and his bright eyes were so wistful.
"Maybe" I said
"Sure we did I feel that I know you"
I felt the same too. I felt there wasn't only a meeting, but a great bond we shared together. I thought I know this good-looking face and that I touched it one day.
He held my hands "We were lovers" he said. The touch of his hand was the same as I have always felt. I remembered him.
"Yes, you were, and still, my love" I said
"I am eager to hear it again" he said
I smiled "I love you"
Then he hugged me. His warm chest was always my head rest.
Nothing interrupted this long romantic hug except a voice was calling "grandma, grandma…"
"This is my granddaughter I take her to walk everyday" I smiled "It was a long time and I am grandma now"
"I am a grandpa too but my love for you is still young"
I bid farewell to him. When the sun sat down, we were continuing our separated lives.
Last edited by Over the top; 12-May-2008 at 18:50.
Hi RonBee
Thanks alot for your correction
I need your opinion about my story.
Is it silly one?
Don't compliment me to make me feel good about myself
please..
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Thank you very much